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Tuesday, 27 June 2017

Using descriptive language.

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Inspired by this video

Adam felt the strong wind pushing him away like a racing car. Swish, swish, the water goes crashing into the enormous boat. - Harmony.

Max was gliding through the sky on his gargantuan, enchanted pirate ship. Trying to slay a mighty beast called a killer beast that lives in the windy, stormy, rainy sky. - Manix

Harry swooped through the powerful wind. He was excited. The pearl part flew past like a rocket. Harry looked terrible, but he was too excited to get changed. He quickly climbed onto the rusty deck. Suddenly a burst of bright pearly light burst from the bird: there it was. - Nell

He has torn pants and top. He has makeup on. The wild breeze sweeps it away. - Jia-Li

One day when he was walking he saw something sparkly and white, he took a closer look at it, then he saw... it was a feather! Harry couldn't believe it looked so beautiful. - Suki

David had makeup falling down his peculiar face. David had a traditional challenge that awaited him and it was to catch a bird. - Levi

Whoosh! Harry felt the powerful wind whizzing through his torn clothes. The rainbow parrot flew down beside him as fast as a volcano. Harry couldn't believe what he was seeing. He was too excited, so he couldn't get dressed. Quietly he climbed onto the old, rusty deck. Suddenly a growling noise came over his old deck. A flash of light came crashing in. - Sunny

Adam was a lonely man holding a magic feather. - Audrina

Dan heard the thick air blow through the distance. He saw the world's largest bird. He wanted to catch it for himself. He was always proud of himself, but never smiled. - Xavier

The makeup was rolling down his cold and sad face. He felt so cold.  - Esha

Adam was a warrior that lived in the wild. He was fast and furious. Wherever Adam had explored around the mighty wild, Adam had only spent a little and extraordinary time there. - Danielle

Hanzo was the wisest man on Earth. he was very lonely. He had a beautiful man bow. Every day he went on his magical flying ship and set bombs all over the place. The reason he is there is because all his family members had passed away and he had no one to spend time with.  - Luka

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