The girl walked down the creepy, dark tunnel. - Audrina
The nervous boy walked through the creepy and wild forest. - Billy
The girl walked down the very creepy tunnel. - James
The stinky boy walked through the wild forest with dangerous animals. - Shrinivas.
Three young kids sat on a slippery boat. One fell off. It was as slippery as melted butter. - Manix.
A girl was on a creepy boat at night, It toppled and tumbled and she fell off the boat and died by the shark. - Ben
The thin girl ran down the long, dark, mesmerizing tunnel. - Levi
Max, on his own, walked through the enchanted forest. It was as peaceful as if you were lying on a couch being lazy. - Brianna
Mela, Sophie and Anna all went in a speed boat which was facing the sky, growling bubbles out the back. - Brianna
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Noah and I am a student in room 13 at New Windsor School. I really like the writing sentences they were very good because your message was really clear. It made me think of when I was learning to make really clear sentences, I had to remember to proofread what I wrote to check my sentences made sense. Now you could make your sentences into story’s
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